EXCITING NEW NOVEL OF 2013: VEGAS WAS HER NAME

Forthcoming from Noir Nation Books, my new thriller novel, VEGAS WAS HER NAME. The story is about a wealthy businessman who finds his family, his business, and his life in jeopardy after having a secret affair. More information coming soon!

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REVIEW OF STRIPPER LESSONS

Stripper LessonsStripper Lessons by John O’Brien

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Have you ever felt alone?

Stripper Lessons provides a window into the life of a lonely man. Carroll is the guy who watches the world turn from the shadows, the guy you walk past at the mall, never knowing he was ever there. But that guy was there, watching you walk past.

The story is personal and the plot only occurs over a few days. I wondered why O’Brien chose this part of Carroll’s seemingly repetitious life. But then Stevie dances her way into his world. O’Brien describes the breathtaking blond with some of the most vivid prose I’ve ever read. I found myself re-reading some of these passages, mesmerized as if I were beholding an artist’s painting or listening to a classical masterpiece. O’Brien gives us very little backstory on these characters, but I can appreciate the “here and now” with Carroll and Stevie’s interactions. I wanted this guy to find what he was lacking. He tried everything, an infomercial video for “shy men,” flashy clothes with “curlicues,” and even alcohol (Carroll’s naivety with booze is the opposite of Ben’s overindulgence in Leaving Las Vegas). But even though Carroll alienates coworkers, barmaids, and strippers over the course of the book, he gains a deeper understanding of himself and an acceptance of who he is, and who he is not.

You always glean new words from O’Brien’s works, and this fact, in my opinion, adds another layer to his stories. As I read Strippers Lessons, I became emotionally involved with Carroll and feared for him as the end neared. In the few days we spend with him in the story, it seemed his subconscious prompted him to grow, and made him become not the guy watching from the shadows, bottling his emotions up, but the guy shouting, tossing and shattering said bottle onto the ground. And I particularly liked how Carroll ran up to Stevie in the parking lot outside of Indiscretions. He was no longer afraid to be a lonely man.

Read Leaving Las Vegas for a view into a character losing his way; read Stripper Lessons for a view into a character finding his way. -Jonathan Sturak 12/08/2012

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CLOUDED RAINBOW: A ROMANTIC THRILLER NOVEL

CLOUDED RAINBOW
A Romantic Thriller Novel

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Synopsis:
Roger Belkin has everything going for him–the car, the career, the marriage, but on one cold, dark night he will lose everything.

Praise for “Clouded Rainbow”

“This is a good airport book for a fast trip and it may even appear in a made [for] TV film.”

– Amazon Top 10 reviewer

“The story is tightly written, and powerfully told. It catches your attention and doesn’t let you go. It is a story of hope and perseverance. It is truly a 5 star novel.”

– Amazon Top 200 reviewer

“Sturak has a good imagination, which is evident in the original plot of this story.”

– RT Book Reviews

“Emotional, chilling and definitely not what I expected…”

– Senior Reviewer / MidWest Book Review